Hues in Grey (A flash fiction)

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The phone rang and she looked at it quickly. She grabbed it and was about to take the call when it got disconnected. She enlarged her eyes & tried looking hard on the network. ” No network ” .. what !! How can there be no network now? The door in front of her remained closed. The light around her started blinking fast and her heart, heart raced. She kept a hand on her chest and said a little prayer.”This is the end, it has to be! I won’t survive to see anyone now! What !! This is how it is supposed to be .”First, it felt a little greyish all around. Then suddenly there was blackout as if big cumulonimbus clouds covering the sky before the arrival of rains. Her heart skipped a beat and then there was a free fall. it was all so sudden that she cried out loud” Mummmmmmmmaaaaaaaa….. save me O ‘ Lord! ” Then, somehow with a jolt, the movement stopped! A total pause! The lift stopped falling and within a few seconds the doors opened & then there was light … a lot of it! “There is indeed light at the end of the tunnel”, She thought to herself & smiled.

“Sonu, wake up !Wake up , right now. Its sunday and already 10 am in the morning! Get up or you will forget your own name and I will make sure it happens!”, a voice called out .

Love ,


4 Comments Add yours

  1. A nice twist to finish with. Well done.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thank you so much. So happy you liked it !


  2. Vikram Karve says:

    Thrilling Flash Fiction


    1. Thank you so much 🥰


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