The doorbell rang and I rushed to open it.
“Hello, my Gudia how are you? It’s been so long! And look what I got for you!!”
There it was! A pizza! Size, large!
“Ohh, today you want to taste Pizza! Tomorrow you want to visit Italy!! What are you? A princess!! Your father works in my field. Do you understand that? Learn to cook. You need to get married soon.” A flashback played in my mind.
“Gudiya, did you forget your uncle?”
I looked at my shining Gold Medal, & smiled.
‘This post is a part of Blogchatter Half Marathon’ . Writing long articles sometimes is easy but to put a thought in just 100 words is difficult. So, I have challenged myself to focus on writing 100 word stories in this challenge, though I will be adding some long posts in between.
Love,
Chinmayee
*Gudia- doll ( fondly addressed to daughters in most of the Indian households )
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Success has many friends. You have portrayed this so, so beautifully! Is this inspired by Mirabai Chanu?
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Thank you for your kind words 🤗 . Yes it is .
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The impactful message was conveyed in few words. nice one.
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Thank you so much for your kind words 🤗
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Ironical but true. Nothing succeeds like success.
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Yes, Sonia . Until one is successful, talent never gets acknowledged . Ironical it is, for sure.
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Life is good too!
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Yes , Sir 😊
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Beautiful story 👏
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Thank you, Abha for stopping by and commenting. Means a lot.
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Made a strong impact in 100 words
Deepika Sharma
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Thanks a ton Deepika for your comments . It means a lot 🙂
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An important message is hidden in such a short tale too. Nicely done, Chinmayee
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Thank you so much for your comments, Manali. Means a lot 🙂
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Very interesting! It’s so sad that people’s attitude change with your success/failure.
It’s tough to tell a complete story in 100 words.
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Thank you Tarang, for your comments . I totally agree with you 🙂
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would want to know how many times you edited the story to get to 100 words and still have an impact 🙂
Great job!
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Well, a master of drafting 100 word stories knows the answer herself 🙂 Thank you immensely.
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Hard work pays in more ways than one!
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Absolutely right!
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You have portrayed this so beautifully!
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Thank you ❤️
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You’re welcome 😀
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How do uh do that ..just in 100 words….
Absolutely amazing 🙌🙌🌺💕
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An impactful short. Nothing makes people change color like success or failure.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Some else also asked and I realised that this was inspired by Mirabai Chanu! Beautiful story!
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Thank you Pratibha 💞
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Thanks for writing this.
Its really motivating.
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Glad you liked it. Thank you so much 🥰
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