Give up …just give up!

“I will love you forever!” he told me, and I surrendered myself to him from that moment. Like twin flames, we burned with passion, and each time, the passion became stronger.

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He slept on the hospital bed. Still. 

“He has slipped into a Coma because of the injury from the Car accident. Recovery would be slow.” The Doctor said.

 “I will wait,” I said

“What… are you mad? A whole life awaits you. You are not even engaged to him. Give up… just give up on him!” They all said.

 I stood beside him. “He is my forever.” I declared.

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  1. How heartbreaking… hope he wakes up
    One shouldn’t give up like the girl though, on their loved ones

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  2. Mahathi's avatar Mahathi says:

    That’s sad. This kind of love is rare , but loving and being loved is a great feeling always even with issues around.

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    1. Thanks for stopping by my blog !

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  3. Difficult to find this now i think, with all kinds of “-ships.”

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  4. I hope the wait will be worth it! Very well written, Chinu!

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  5. This is so heart-breakingly beautiful! I wish all lovers in this world stay together always and they never fall apart.

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    1. Ahhh… I wish so too !

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